Wednesday, October 8, 2008

rain----6

rain
wet
cold
breeze
.
pain
pit
stomach
freeze
.
knowin
yet
shutting
eyes
.
aim
shoot
kill
please
.

4 comments:

Preeti said...

shoon...a haiku for you


i dont know what to say
so i'll feel good
and just walk away

ra said...

heck shoon, rains takin on a persona of its own.

Mirandian said...

You
Friend
Happy
Always!

Shoonyata said...

preeti: Thank you...and as long as u feel good, that is enough

ra: rain has a complex and powerful personality :)

M: yes maam :)))