Thursday, October 23, 2008

no !

no
it is not
that
.
you are
a virgin
your mouth tastes
roasted tobacco
you think
Ayn Rand
is a saint
.
it is
just that
.
may be
just
may be
.
you are
too young
i am
too old
.
and
scared stiff
!

12 comments:

Preeti said...

Who is scared stiff, Shoon...?
You...? Why do i find this difficult to absorb...?

and the poem is as usual...breathtakingly beautiful...

sometimes i wonder what you're thinking when you write such poems...

Shoonyata said...

Preeti: i dont write what I think, i write what i feel :)))

oh, i get scared many a time...!

Preeti said...

sometimes i wonder what you feel when you write such poems...

:-)

Shoonyata said...

Preeti: well ....:)))

I feel, therefore I am !

Preeti said...

What scares you, shoon...?

Trinaa said...

wht? wht? wht? wht has age got to do with anything?

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

i can so relate to this one... too young and too old...

Shoonyata said...

preeti: have sent you a mail :)

trinaa: well, it shdnt, but when one is 25 and the other closer to 104??? :)

raaji: welcome back after a long time!

Preeti said...

I read it...

replied too!!!

hmmnnn...after reading this comment thread i am kind of getting the analogy...but with you Shoon, one never knows...!!!!

ra said...

shoon, think u may have well outdone ur self this time. me thinks (knows) ur not from this dimension and even there uve just blitzed urself into untouchable plane.

Trinaa said...

104? haan phir thik hai.. :P

Shoonyata said...

ra: well, well my friend, that is life!

trinaa: :)))