Friday, January 4, 2008

end of the year

time
finds its tail
and swallows itself
.
seizing the moment
my shadow grabs me
after the year long chase
.
eye to eye
i ask
now wtf ?
.

8 comments:

moochhi said...

this is a good one.
if we were to slip into ourselves, what would we call it? self absorbed?
then nothing exists...so do I?
if the bindu exists in order for us to learn how to create it, is it in the past, present or future?
if i could change what i am would i really be me?
wtf?

ra said...

a fortune favored 2008 mon ami.

your lines....quite a dilemma(!?)

the beginning of the end of the beginning.

jump in, rip the garb

Compassion Unlimitted said...

Hi..from Prats here for the first time
Nice one for the New Year..short and sweet
TC
CU

Shoonyata said...

moochi: yes sir, wtf!

ra: thanks me friend. you are right...

CU: thanks for visiting

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

this is the most interesting poem you wrote... and this one is without a twist! :-)

Sometimes straightforward writing is good too..hehe
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!
I hope you keep writing. I know I will be reading :-)
Take care, my friend
Cheers!

Shoonyata said...

Raaji: thanks...will certainly keep writing...that is needed to preserve sanity :)

3inone said...

wtf?
:)
like this one very much!

Churu Churu said...

hahah
funny.