Friday, December 28, 2007

under the street tree

under the street tree
frozen bits
of dogs pee
as they stick
to her little lips
smiling with
the X-mas dream
santa lost his way
and so also the wolf
as trees you know
don’t sprout chimneys


ra said...

dont know if i shoulh laugh or draw a gun!

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

hmm interesting... but i am not sure how to comprehend the first stanza. :-S

Mirandian said...

Happy New Year!
As for Santa losing his way...
I don't believe U!
Unless, this is not The Santa!

Renovatio said...

Have a great year ahead, just not too much of frozen dog pee :p

Shoonyata said...

ra: you cant use the gun if you cant laugh, my friend

raaji: just underlining the depths where the street children live in

mirandian: walk down Bangalore city and see the kids on the street...santa is dead..his ghost is ofcourse alive, living off the marketing arsenal

reno: thanks...:)))

ra said...

oh, my bad, er, i meant "draw" a gun. no intentions of using one.

Shoonyata said...

ra: whether u draw one or hold one, the mind relates to it...better be care ful :)