Thursday, January 10, 2008

your words


like
your smell
lingering in the breeze
long after
you left my bed
.
your words
wet, warm and sticky
slowly dries
bridging
the clefts in my mind
.

6 comments:

ra said...

its odd that you have a post like this and on this date. strange week this.

was a time when this date was the end. and now its a date, just a date. and those words.....were perfect for a time because of the date, because of what happened. but now, theyre words(with a certain degree of weight) and its just a date.

Prats said...

This was an interesting play with words...

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

wow.. beautiful...
I would have to say this wuld be one of my fav poems by you :)
Thanks for writing so beautifully!

sift said...

:-)

Shoonyata said...

ra: my friend, our universe is linked :)

prats: thanks....

raaji: thanks for the kind words... will keep writing !

sift: :))) to you too

Churu Churu said...

pretty lines.
i like the accompanying sketch too.