Thursday, January 10, 2008

your words

your smell
lingering in the breeze
long after
you left my bed
your words
wet, warm and sticky
slowly dries
the clefts in my mind


ra said...

its odd that you have a post like this and on this date. strange week this.

was a time when this date was the end. and now its a date, just a date. and those words.....were perfect for a time because of the date, because of what happened. but now, theyre words(with a certain degree of weight) and its just a date.

Prats said...

This was an interesting play with words...

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

wow.. beautiful...
I would have to say this wuld be one of my fav poems by you :)
Thanks for writing so beautifully!

sift said...


Shoonyata said...

ra: my friend, our universe is linked :)

prats: thanks....

raaji: thanks for the kind words... will keep writing !

sift: :))) to you too

Churu Churu said...

pretty lines.
i like the accompanying sketch too.