Monday, September 10, 2007

Your mind, my body

my body
grope for
your mind
to touch
to its movements
as your body
demand mine
in sacrifice
in return


(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

ok,.. i dont even have words to describe your poetry. You are so simple yet so freakin' amazing!!!
I love the poem you wrote on my post. Exceptional!!!!!

ra said...

rain 4 was the most interesting for me.

btw, are the line counts intentional? there is a lot of effort in choosing your words. very simplistic. so concise at times. drives the message home. dont get me wrong, i do the same. dont think anybody has noticed(the things i write, not my blog!!!)

your dark edge, me wonders where that comes from, what fuels it exactly?

Shoonyata said...

@ Raaji: Thanks !!!
@ Ra: Dark edge from by dark past :)