Thursday, September 20, 2007

me, you and the crowd


i can see
your tentacles move
like snaky thoughts
in the crowd
.
intensely seeking
to enter
me
filling
my senses
my pores
.
but
.
i have kissed
your woman
and sucked out
your smell
your taste
the fear
you ejaculated inside
.
so I can see
the luminous presence
of your shadow
without
the hidden body
.
as I dance around
the swirling
strands
of you
.
scarring many
in the crowd
.
collateral
damage
.

6 comments:

ra said...

shoon, mon ami

true evil genius!

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

One word: Wicked.

You are too creative :)

Shoonyata said...

@ra: merci...merci :) evil also needs a platform for expression!

@raaji: Thanks...wicked who? me? :)))

sift said...

this is the ultimate poem you have written!! You surpass your previous work everytime...
it's high time you publish, damn!!

kammommy said...

ihave kissed
your woman
and sucked out
your smell
your taste
the fear
you ejaculated inside
.

I read ur post in the morn...n even now this stanza sticks in my head. this is ur masterpiece. i wish i had written this ...i wish i could write like this...wow

Shoonyata said...

@sift: Thanks...yes, I am starting to work on it
@Kammommy: Thanks for dropping by. Liked the pictures.