hmm that one is not as simple as it seems. You poems require some time to actually register in anyone's mind. But thats they beauty in them :) I tried to follow ur footsteps.... just wrote a lousy poem :)
laughed a little inside. not because its funny, but because it true. in more ways than a hundred.
:)short, simple and sweet...funny too :)))
@ raaji: Thanks...yr poem is not lousy..just keep writing!@ ra: True...true and true :)))@ Dewdrop: Thanks for the visit.
the stranger is a person, an idea, a place, a space, a thing, a child, my/your lover, my/your wished for love, work devils - all starngers to this particuler space, but not a stranger to me or you. slides in like a wisp of smoke, intangible but felt all the same.the older i get the harder it is to be there and fully so. strangers creep in all the time...is it lack of love or a love/fear of opportunity?
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