Tuesday, December 30, 2008

2008/9

between one
on
this side
and another
on
the other side
.
blink
.
just
a
blink
?

8 comments:

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

true.
that is very articulate and thought provoking.

ra said...

blogger seems to conspire against me. hopefully this time i can get thru.

mon ami, ur posts makes sense in the way it was never written. u see what i find most interesting is what u write and WHEN u write it. there is ALWAYS that correlation. it may sound(read) inane, but it has been strange. no it IS strange. inexplicable deja vu and then blender speed of choice.

i read this post and i then i read again.

Shoonyata said...

Raaji: Thank you....

ra: what is written was always there, hanging by some strands that brushed your face at times..now you see it, touch it!!!

Shoonyata said...

Raaji: Thank you....

ra: what is written was always there, hanging by some strands that brushed your face at times..now you see it, touch it!!!

Corpus Gray said...

Enigmatic! ;-)

Mirandian said...

*Blink* Happy New Year! :)

ra said...

hey, the disappearing act is usually my trick. where u at buddy?

usha said...

I liked this one..I guess it is difficult to comment on poetry but some how this poem seemed to have something that drew me in.