Thursday, July 31, 2008

thresholds

thresholds
.
drawn with toes
on water
.
etched with nails
on the breeze
.
fenced with thoughts
in the mind
.
blur melt and disappear
in the warmth
of your presence
.

3 comments:

mayz said...

niceee!!!
nowdayz m seein a different side of u dude

ra said...

hey shoon, its good to be back.

ive started another.......

kammommy said...

you know i came back to read your poem "So said the woman".

Its a master piece. i love it . i love it and wish i'd written it a million times.

And wat you say, is so true.