Tuesday, August 5, 2008

ice maiden

icy winds
trapped in you
frost
your eyes
.
words freeze
leaving
the
ruby lips
.
blood stains
on them
glow
like fire flies
.
let me
pour my wine
in
your navel
.
chill it
a wee bit
before
i sip
.
!

7 comments:

mayz said...

hell freezin over dude??
or in love wid d devil??

Shoonyata said...

mayz: am always in love with the devil...and hell freezes over is so nostalgic !!!

mayz said...

i guess every1 is in love wid d devil...it kinds frees us...wat say??

ray said...

Hi ,

I was reading ur blog posts and found some of them to be wow.. u write well.. Why don't you popularize it more.. ur posts on ur blog ‘Shoonyata’ took my particular attention as some of them are interesting topics of mine too; i think this is a sort of extreme love.....

BTW I help out some ex-IIMA guys who with another batch mate run www.rambhai.com where you can post links to your most loved blog-posts. Rambhai was the chaiwala at IIMA and it is a site where users can themselves share links to blog posts etc and other can find and vote on them. The best make it to the homepage!

This way you can reach out to rambhai readers some of whom could become your ardent fans.. who knows.. :)

Cheers,

ra said...

vampyre

let the wine spill from veins

Geeta said...

'Thresholds' spoke of the warmth of her presence, while the
'Ice Maiden'freezes wine and words...!

kammommy said...

wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

i know an ice maiden who wud appreciate that.