Wednesday, November 14, 2007

me and the sea--3


how
you
sailed thru
.
leaving
flurescent
trail
.
on the still waters
of my
mind
.
once touched
never the same
again
.

8 comments:

Prats said...

Just back from Goa, and I so agree with that line **once touched
never the same again**

The sea does do that to me....

and u need to be warned, that you've been tagged by me, drop into my site and you'll know what I mean :)

ra said...

ditto prats' first 3 lines.

what if those still waters finally dried up though?

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

once touched,
never the same again...

*sigh*

your poems never fail to touch my heart.

Mirandian said...

Yes...once in a while....something...someone special sails thru your life...touching you & leaving you...never the same again!
So, enjoy the moment!

Shoonyata said...

prats: never attempted a tag..but will attempt over the weekend :)

ra: even when the waters dry up, the trail remains...

raaji: thanks.....

Mirandian: agree with you...

Compassion Unlimitted said...

Ripples in the still water,is it lol .hmm
nice one
TC
CU

Savitha said...

I am the sea
millions of treasures
menacing creatures
frightfully dark corners

infinity trapped in one small human body
just a piece of cork to be nudged
by someone keeping tabs from past lifetimes
oh..the flourescent trail i left behind ..

inning after inning
drama after drama
do i even know ?
do i even tire ?

so true..
once touched, never the same again..
Pandora's box opened
never to close again...

sift said...

lovely...peom and picture!