intersections shift and blur
as the breeze blows
.
mind nails it down
like frog on a board
.
amazing that the heart
is throbing still
.
have the nails
begun to dance
as the breeze blows
.
mind nails it down
like frog on a board
.
amazing that the heart
is throbing still
.
have the nails
begun to dance
?
7 comments:
incisive man! the idea is great, but your poetry could have been better.
Give it some scratch
yuo pick random things and put them together so beautifully.
Wonderful!
the heart doesnt stop until you take the spirit away
wow! You write such simple and very beautiful lines.
Can I ask you one thing? Why have u named this blog Shunyata? It struck me cos, I had posted in the same title a few posts ago here and was wondering what made you take it up?
hey, sorry the previous comment had to be deleted, cos the link was not given properly
sift: it just flowed...didnt think of poerty :(
raaji: thanks....
ra: that is a good one...food to chew on for another post!
prat: thanks for visiting...read yr post as well...it triggered the new post on Shoonyata :)
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