Friday, October 12, 2007

Vacation

the wound up
clock
will let go
the spring
.
time
will lie
shattered
all over
.
covering words
yet to be
written
.
the sea and ship
distant lands
blue mermaids
beckon
.
will be back
and rescue
the words
unlock the comments
.
bye till then

5 comments:

ra said...

the lighter side of shoon, dare i say?!! hehe

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

hmmm there is a twist in this one...
I kind of like it.. :)

Mirandian said...

I guess you're back from your "Vacation"....unlocking comments & leaving comments!

By the way, I am of strong conviction that my childhood days (don't know which generation you are!)were much much better!

Shoonyata said...

@ra: "light side of the moon..sorry shoon?" :)

@raaji: Thanks...

@mirandian: yes, back from a cruise! every generation feels the way you do! I have some good young friends...and i can tell you kids these days have good fun too...

BTW: i am very old...about 104 :)

Chrisann said...

I love the poem you wrote me
:)
all flattered