Friday, October 12, 2007


the wound up
will let go
the spring
will lie
all over
covering words
yet to be
the sea and ship
distant lands
blue mermaids
will be back
and rescue
the words
unlock the comments
bye till then


ra said...

the lighter side of shoon, dare i say?!! hehe

(¯`•._.•[Raaji]•._.•´¯) said...

hmmm there is a twist in this one...
I kind of like it.. :)

Mirandian said...

I guess you're back from your "Vacation"....unlocking comments & leaving comments!

By the way, I am of strong conviction that my childhood days (don't know which generation you are!)were much much better!

Shoonyata said...

@ra: "light side of the moon..sorry shoon?" :)

@raaji: Thanks...

@mirandian: yes, back from a cruise! every generation feels the way you do! I have some good young friends...and i can tell you kids these days have good fun too...

BTW: i am very old...about 104 :)

Chrisann said...

I love the poem you wrote me
all flattered