Tuesday, April 15, 2008

your words--2

your words
incessant rain drops
making wet translucent patches
on the veil
.
glimpses of
beautiful shadows
of hidden silence
waiting for the waltz
.
rain drops turn midnight mist
as music plays
still wraping the silence
buried deep within
.

11 comments:

mayz said...

sometimes i jus fail to understand ur poems

Shoonyata said...

@ mayz: i can empathise with you.. and in writing them, I try to understand myself :)

Prats said...

Is that how you feel right now???
Nice play of words...

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Anna said...

Maravilhoso!

Mirandian said...

Hmmm...would love to know whose words??? Whose words is it that makes you remind of incessant rain....

Shoonyata said...

prats: thanks...all feelings get captured in the web...some fleeting, some deeper :)

Celulite: Thanks for dropping by

anna: mucho gracias!

Mirandian: Hmmmm...that is a good question...best kept a secret right now :)

Churu Churu said...

interesting.

Churu Churu said...

lovely :)

sahyadri said...

i search for the screaming silence of words that mean things i dont understand and yet know that i need thier mute sounds around to envelope a warm womb around me......

been a while caught up in the corporate rat race, love these lines .... rain, silence, shadow of silence ... music.. this is lovely

Melissa Finley said...

Hi! I found your work through Farustar's blog. I think the way you structure your poems are interesting and raw. Something very powerful. Looking forward to more!
~Melissa