Wednesday, March 19, 2008

doubt

strands of hair
on your shirt
but no thread of guilt
in your smile
.
slight smudge of lipstick
on your collar
but no shadow hiding
the twinkle in your eyes
.
wisp of her smell
on your body
but no trace of tiredness
in your eagerness
.
vines of doubt
hanging from my mind
but nothing to swing
or tie you up with
!

8 comments:

ra said...

hmmm. evidence of evidence but cant prove a thing??

Prats said...

oh, that was nice!

mayz said...

niceeeeee!!!!!!!!!!

sahyadri said...

wow!

Thinking aloud said...

very very nice...sad too...

just wanted to ask you..did you mean 'vines'?

Shoonyata said...

ra: cant prove to oneself.

Prats/mayz/sahyadri: thank you...

thinking aloud: thanks for the spell check..i am bad at it. have changed. thanks for visiting

Nags said...

thanks :)

farustar said...

hey, thanks! you're pretty good too :D