Friday, May 7, 2010

one more smile

Your smile creeps from the words on the phone screen dangles for a moment on my finger, catches breath and then snakes up my hand tickling as it darts inside my sleeve up my shoulder, pause to nibble my ear-lobe and then treks up my eyebrow and then strips fully naked, dives into the still-dead-pool in my eye, creating lovely ripples that light up all that is inside and outside. One more smile pl. just for the other eye
:)

11 comments:

(¯`•._.•[Raajii]•._.•´¯) said...

ah so lovely! You have a way to tickle my emotions ;-)

Shoonyata said...

Raaji: glad about it...more tickles on the way :)

sift said...

aaaah! wholesome

I said...

My first comment here.

Wonder what your smile does to the one at the other end?

:)

Cheers!

I

Shoonyata said...

sift: thanks

I: That is food for thought!!! Welcome to this space :)

ra said...

hey shoon! h u doin? this post is so true. kinda how i feel when im with a certain someone, but cant really bring myself to say anythin worthwhile. haha.

Shoonyata said...

Ra: my long lost brother!!! wtf happend to you? are you still that angry young man pissed off with the world, loves the woman you hate, writes in brilliant flashes guy? Hope you are kind with the world these days :)))

ra said...

lol, lets put it this way....im more at peace wit myself. not lost bro, just rediscoverin n tryin to go back to what made the clock tick wit precision

ra said...

oh, i aint that young. i just weather a lot less than most people do. unless of course, age like everything else is relative, yeah, in that case im 14.

Bluehaze said...

Vary nice. Keep it up!

sush writes said...

sensuous to say the least vow you have grown .sush