Monday, March 22, 2010

so said the woman---7

baiting your thoughts
with my words
riding it
by its tail
as it gallops
.
i reach
the edge
of your mind
.
as it prowls
untamed by the warmth
of the grip of my thighs
reigned a bit by
my hand on the tail
.
what now
what next
?

7 comments:

(¯`•._.•[Raajii]•._.•´¯) said...

wow... you are getting so good at this. Too bad you had to take the last post off.

I believe it was very powerful. I think sometimes we have to be upfront and very real in order to get the real point across. Sugar coating is not right then.

(¯`•._.•[Raajii]•._.•´¯) said...

and thank you so much for the birthday wishes! they make me feel so special :-)

ra said...

what is with woman? and why we do love? and then love to hate? and then love more?

Shoonyata said...

raaji: thanks...i agree with you...I took it off in consideration to some very young visitors here. hope you had a blast on your Bday :)

ra: son-of-a-gun, where were you? welcome back!!! was missing your presence. BTW, I dont hate women at all....truly :)

sift said...

:-) u think u can always be a hunter? With words i mean?

Shoonyata said...

Sift: i been all of the hunter, the hunted, the bait, the trap, the witness and many more...with words, i mean :)))

ra said...

been lost and then lost"er".

i kno u dont hate women....but sometimes woman dont understand what it all means.

lol, i dunno im rambling. tryin to get hammered here.