Monday, March 22, 2010

so said the woman---7

baiting your thoughts
with my words
riding it
by its tail
as it gallops
.
i reach
the edge
of your mind
.
as it prowls
untamed by the warmth
of the grip of my thighs
reigned a bit by
my hand on the tail
.
what now
what next
?

7 comments:

WritingsForLife said...

wow... you are getting so good at this. Too bad you had to take the last post off.

I believe it was very powerful. I think sometimes we have to be upfront and very real in order to get the real point across. Sugar coating is not right then.

WritingsForLife said...

and thank you so much for the birthday wishes! they make me feel so special :-)

ra said...

what is with woman? and why we do love? and then love to hate? and then love more?

Shoonyata said...

raaji: thanks...i agree with you...I took it off in consideration to some very young visitors here. hope you had a blast on your Bday :)

ra: son-of-a-gun, where were you? welcome back!!! was missing your presence. BTW, I dont hate women at all....truly :)

sift said...

:-) u think u can always be a hunter? With words i mean?

Shoonyata said...

Sift: i been all of the hunter, the hunted, the bait, the trap, the witness and many more...with words, i mean :)))

ra said...

been lost and then lost"er".

i kno u dont hate women....but sometimes woman dont understand what it all means.

lol, i dunno im rambling. tryin to get hammered here.