garland of lilies lie
withering and heavy on your bosom-
dry taste of summer breeze
.
little spider stalks
gingerly on its own web-
time seeps through unnoticed
.
breeze blows dry dead lilies
black strands of broken web unstuck-
time moves riding your sigh
!
7 comments:
ahh... so good. soo good!
mon ami, thanks...my 1st attempt at haiku :)
da, how do you manage to keep the form and verse in rhythm?
i read up a bit on haiku, forgot what it was :-)
can sighs be similar to dead lilies?
haiku reminds me of a classical raga that revisits its tune with mischief and "adaah" (style...) - Like a hem in a saree...:-)
well written, you have real talent with words in poetry.
i love haikus
these are very well written!
@ SIFT: sighs are not yet dead, they are withering :)
@anan & FMN: Thanks, glad you like this :)
garland of lilies lie has 6 syllables gar-land of lil-ies lie
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