Tuesday, July 15, 2008

so said the woman-3

i feel
the incredible lightness of being
having said
the unsaid
which is now
a feather
being blown about
the jerky movements
of your restless mind
.
i feel
the incredible lightness of being
having made
that tightness inside
melt
getting you unstuck
from my thoughts
.
i feel
the incredible lightness of being
having said
what i feel
waiting for you
to pluck it
from no man's land
.

3 comments:

moochhi said...

good one. the incredible lightness of being is magical. one flies, one soars, one merges with the universe; and all for getting things off the chest - a burden one holds - not knowing why.

Shoonyata said...

yes, sir...you got it :)

Mirandian said...

Shoon,
Yes so true it is.
The incredible lightness one feels
When one bares one's soul
To one who truly understands...