Tuesday, April 15, 2008

your words--2

your words
incessant rain drops
making wet translucent patches
on the veil
.
glimpses of
beautiful shadows
of hidden silence
waiting for the waltz
.
rain drops turn midnight mist
as music plays
still wraping the silence
buried deep within
.

10 comments:

Lucifer said...

sometimes i jus fail to understand ur poems

Shoonyata said...

@ mayz: i can empathise with you.. and in writing them, I try to understand myself :)

Prats said...

Is that how you feel right now???
Nice play of words...

Ana Tapadas said...

Maravilhoso!

Mirandian said...

Hmmm...would love to know whose words??? Whose words is it that makes you remind of incessant rain....

Shoonyata said...

prats: thanks...all feelings get captured in the web...some fleeting, some deeper :)

Celulite: Thanks for dropping by

anna: mucho gracias!

Mirandian: Hmmmm...that is a good question...best kept a secret right now :)

Churu Churu said...

interesting.

Churu Churu said...

lovely :)

sahyadri said...

i search for the screaming silence of words that mean things i dont understand and yet know that i need thier mute sounds around to envelope a warm womb around me......

been a while caught up in the corporate rat race, love these lines .... rain, silence, shadow of silence ... music.. this is lovely

Melissa Finley said...

Hi! I found your work through Farustar's blog. I think the way you structure your poems are interesting and raw. Something very powerful. Looking forward to more!
~Melissa